Hi Jackson i'm George from Grey Main School i think that you got your numbers muddled up a bit. I like that you added that little bit of scariness in the ending were the mum ate the people. this reminds me of when i was at home and i was bored and i wrote a scary story. All together i like your work.
Hi Jackson i'm George from Grey Main School i think that you got your numbers muddled up a bit. I like that you added that little bit of scariness in the ending were the mum ate the people. this reminds me of when i was at home and i was bored and i wrote a scary story. All together i like your work.
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